Well, I gotta say, you're not doin too bad. Unique sprites used, looks like some planning is involved.
You might want to lower the pannel count. That many tends to clog up the strip. Also increase the size of the "gutter" (the line between pannels) which will give you a bit more clarity.
This could have actually been two strips. The teleport away, then the remainder.
But, you do a lot of things right (ie word bubbles, no author character) so just keep at it
Kujaju at 7:40PM, Sept. 8, 2006
thanks for the advice. *note* the green...ish knighty character(doesn't have a name yet) will eventually be a main character.
theduckofanime at 7:22PM, Sept. 8, 2006
Well, I gotta say, you're not doin too bad. Unique sprites used, looks like some planning is involved. You might want to lower the pannel count. That many tends to clog up the strip. Also increase the size of the "gutter" (the line between pannels) which will give you a bit more clarity. This could have actually been two strips. The teleport away, then the remainder. But, you do a lot of things right (ie word bubbles, no author character) so just keep at it
Kujaju at 7:07PM, Sept. 8, 2006
I don't think the strech feature likes me.