You have a promblem with PNG?
if you made these in paint save one as a PNG, and when you save another it will be in PNG already, then you name it with a number and save it.
I found out that none of your toad's faces are colored white, it is a hard thing to do but some sprites do that for some reason.
And if this is the Mushroom kingdom, make the toad's heads white and red.
don't make them look like they came from Bowser.
Ok, because apparently you think my comment wasn't "helpful" enough last time, here's another one.
1) Your text is hard to read on the edges. You can handle this 2 ways. Either you can add an extra space between the border and where the text starts, or you can enlarge the square by drawing over it with a white square using the "Rectangle" icon in Paint.
2) You've got a few spelling errors. I'd suggest looking it over a few times when you're writing it, or put your script through Microsoft Word's spellcheck first.
3) Your panels need to be larger, width-wise or height-wise. They look too cramped right now with all the text in them.
4) Personally, I didn't think the joke made any sense. You're going for a "random humor" in this specific strip, I get that... but that's not how random humor is done.
Listen, I don't comment on people's comics to be an ass. I'm not trying to make enemies here, but I'm not going to coddle you and give you 5's even though you have mistakes. I told you what I found wrong with your other strip. They were mistakes where the main advice was, "Don't do it again," so I felt it was only worth mentioning them instead of wasting your time putting that after every one of them.
... And this wall of text ends here. : P
Nintendude at 6:50PM, July 19, 2006
You have a promblem with PNG? if you made these in paint save one as a PNG, and when you save another it will be in PNG already, then you name it with a number and save it.
Nintendude at 11:53AM, July 19, 2006
I found out that none of your toad's faces are colored white, it is a hard thing to do but some sprites do that for some reason. And if this is the Mushroom kingdom, make the toad's heads white and red. don't make them look like they came from Bowser.
Vagabond at 6:27PM, July 18, 2006
Ok, because apparently you think my comment wasn't "helpful" enough last time, here's another one. 1) Your text is hard to read on the edges. You can handle this 2 ways. Either you can add an extra space between the border and where the text starts, or you can enlarge the square by drawing over it with a white square using the "Rectangle" icon in Paint. 2) You've got a few spelling errors. I'd suggest looking it over a few times when you're writing it, or put your script through Microsoft Word's spellcheck first. 3) Your panels need to be larger, width-wise or height-wise. They look too cramped right now with all the text in them. 4) Personally, I didn't think the joke made any sense. You're going for a "random humor" in this specific strip, I get that... but that's not how random humor is done. Listen, I don't comment on people's comics to be an ass. I'm not trying to make enemies here, but I'm not going to coddle you and give you 5's even though you have mistakes. I told you what I found wrong with your other strip. They were mistakes where the main advice was, "Don't do it again," so I felt it was only worth mentioning them instead of wasting your time putting that after every one of them. ... And this wall of text ends here. : P