Darius Drake at 2:34AM, Oct. 19, 2014

And, shortly after posting that, I looked at your DA and saw the Halloween comic for Bram & Vlad. I have to say, on that comic, Vlad's costume was missing something. An Angry Face Mask. Added later then deleted the origional post - in panel 2 "quitted" isn't a word in english, the past tense of "quit" is "quit".

Darius Drake at 12:17AM, Oct. 19, 2014

Difficult, partially I don't understand what Bessie wants help with Lucy for. Let's try "In short? Bram's crushing on her, but it's not mutual. I like him, so help me..." If I was to entirely rewrite what I suspect Bessie's saying in that panel, I would say, "In short? Bram's crushing on her, but it's not mutual. I like him, so help me get with him, and I'll keep him off of you."

strixvanallen at 6:20PM, Oct. 18, 2014

@Darius, in Portuguese, I had a very short way to imply that Bram liked Lucy but it wasn't mutual. When I tried to fit the English text, I couldn't do it properly. Do you have any ideas on how to do it without making too big to fit in the bubble? I can make it a little bigger, but no much. @Spikes, yes. Let's see where it will take us. xD

Spikes at 11:07PM, Oct. 17, 2014

An accord has been struck.

Darius Drake at 8:53PM, Oct. 17, 2014

She didn't mention the fact that Bram likes Lucy. Oh well.