What was lost...: 7
valesse on March 26, 2009
So it doesn't move the story along very far, but it's actually a very exciting page! Just look at the new shiny things you have to look forward to seeing in later pages!! We've already seen three of them, but do we know why we've seen them! –this is where you tell me I haven't explained ANYTHING– But I have! There's more to this page than meets the eye!
Oh, and Rhys is going to get his hair cut soon because that's a typical rite of passage thingy… and because I've been made aware no one can tell him apart from Eiosol (he's dead!) and Ories (He has bangs!).
valesse at 3:09PM, March 27, 2009
Yep! Well, 'soon' is relative. I'm trying to beef up my coloring skillz-- in fact this update was nearly late because I was working on: http://valesse.deviantart.com/art/strike-a-pose-117215827 most of the day. The legs look like they have a fish-eye legs thing going on, but it looks shiny, so I'm happy.
Sei at 12:53PM, March 27, 2009
Oh wow, he is quite the large merman isn't he? o.O Soon to be in colour? YES!!
valesse at 8:16AM, March 27, 2009
Lilac: You're not annoying! Never say that! You're giving me a lot of creative help, and I fully appreciate every last bit! It has always been part of the plan to have color, but for this part of the story there is suppose to be a marked absence of it (for reasons which give away part of the plot... so I can't expound more). *hugs* Thanks Whirlwynd!!
Whirlwynd at 11:09PM, March 26, 2009
I like your linework =)
Lilac at 10:56PM, March 26, 2009
I don't want to sound...annoying...but it would also help if you added a little color. Maybe color in the eyes or something? That might help your readers tell the difference between characters. D: