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FracturedFairytales on Oct. 12, 2006
The end of chapter 1, up next comes a Julie cover and the Sphere's first fight scene, which'll earn it the M rating… we might actually have to bump it up before the end ^^;
FracturedFairytales on Oct. 12, 2006
The end of chapter 1, up next comes a Julie cover and the Sphere's first fight scene, which'll earn it the M rating… we might actually have to bump it up before the end ^^;
mishi_hime at 8:26AM, Oct. 14, 2006
just a few things i've noticed that make a better comic. 1.your text bubbles. I think they stand out way too much. this is probably bcause they have more contrast than the art. thi can be easily fixed by just adding more extreme highlights and darks to the art or making the text a dark grey rather than black. 2.your text. some of the fonts you use are kinda scratchy-this is prolly your program's fault.I also think your text would look better centered in the bubble. (Ive noticed your tendency to have wider text bubbles) i hope all that makes sense. its just a few annoying things ive noticed-but yknow im a fan
FracturedFairytales at 5:14PM, Oct. 13, 2006
I think I should clear this up, Chris draws CS in the traditional right-to-left up-to-down Japanese style ^^; It should help you make more sense of it all and thanks Chary ^_^
chary at 12:47PM, Oct. 13, 2006
Interesting ^^. Great backgrounds again, nice job on the speedy effects as well ;). Superb shading again ^^. And I don't think it will really earn a mature rating for fighting, even if the fight is very bloody and gorey it will usually just be about PG 16, usually fighting will come on about PG 13/14/15, depending on the violence. I could be worn, but I thought I'd just inform you ;).