Third page, basically introducing some new characters. Took me forever to get Necros right on that second panel. And I'll fix the layour some other time. I know it's hard to interpet right now.
I think your coloring and page layout seem to work for what youââ¬â¢re shooting for, which is a surreal chaotic sort of feel. I canââ¬â¢t want to see how you define your characters further as the story goes on.
Tantz_Aerine at 2:50PM, Nov. 14, 2006
interesting, perversely so. (this is a complement)
PinkDiapers at 12:28PM, Nov. 11, 2006
I think your coloring and page layout seem to work for what youââ¬â¢re shooting for, which is a surreal chaotic sort of feel. I canââ¬â¢t want to see how you define your characters further as the story goes on.
mishi_hime at 7:52PM, Nov. 10, 2006
scary. kinda cluttered
Seductress_in_a_suit at 1:54PM, Nov. 10, 2006
Cool premise, and what is leading up to an interesting story, but the layout and speech is a bit all over the place.