drunk ducky121 at 2:34PM, Aug. 2, 2010

oh yea thats really bad how do i fix that

Ettie at 2:30PM, Aug. 2, 2010

Not to mention, the name of your comic is mispelled: Legendary

Ettie at 2:27PM, Aug. 2, 2010

But this isn't a movie, this is a comic. You should still proofread your work if you want readers to feel like you are putting 100% top notch quality and effort into your comic. Since It is not proofread. If you do not proofread what you have written, I will stop reading this comic. If the character doesn't speak proper english, then you need to emphasize that rather than what you did in this comic.

drunk ducky121 at 12:57PM, Aug. 2, 2010

broly doesnt speak proper english all he says is kakarot the whole movie

Ettie at 9:35PM, Aug. 1, 2010

I'm sorry but there has not been any improvement since I gave you the last comics besides the chat bubbles, the effects, and the noises. You have crooked panels and in panel 6 your effects are going over the panel into the border. Ok, you need to proofread your pages. "no youve got it all wrong im not goku" -missing punctuation and capitalization "now you never cry again" -missing punctuation and incorrect word. -corrected should look like: "Now you'll never cry again!" "OUT,IM GONNA KNOCK YOU OUT" -wrong punctuation and missing punctuation. Should Read like: "...Out. I'M GONNA KNOCK YOU OUT" Not to mention, the weird grammer doesn't match the character's personality which you have been attempting to develop since the beginning of the comic. ALSO, make sure to capitalize the beginnings of every sentence. You've made this error over and over now. Sorry, but you have not improved this time. I do hope you will improve next time. I'm not leaving these comments just to be nit picky. I understand you are newer and want to become better.