AlpineBob at 12:19AM, May 16, 2016

I _am_ that guy. I don't really expect you to care, so long after posting, but on the off chance... "Of" should be "off" in the first panel. Oh, and I'm finding the story intriguing. The art is cool too!

globep at 12:08PM, Feb. 7, 2010

he looks so badass in the last panel .

BlueSoulber at 1:15PM, Feb. 11, 2009

ooo that is deep, love the last panel

blntmaker at 1:31AM, Jan. 13, 2008

Look at those perspectives! A huge departure from Naomi.

jissai at 4:57AM, Dec. 29, 2007

faved!

D0m at 7:27AM, Dec. 24, 2007

Yes, yes. Something new and fresh! Love the art style.

Ozien at 4:22AM, Dec. 14, 2007

Love your style.

Dave7 at 10:31PM, Dec. 12, 2007

A rather unique way to open a story so far. And I like the graphic style. I'll fave this and see where it leads.

chrisj at 7:44PM, Dec. 10, 2007

Strong and original graphic style.I'll be back.

shungnai at 6:46AM, Dec. 10, 2007

I*LOVE*YOUR*ARTS! *fav*

milkjunkie at 3:59PM, Dec. 7, 2007

i am really amazed by panel 4, the first nicholas panel. dien looks so fucking dienish! he looks really great in the last panel as well, though i think his pants have a weird colour compared to the rest of the page. does nicholas have a star in his eyes? of is that just a coincidence :p 5+

TheMidge28 at 9:23AM, Dec. 7, 2007

Absolutely beautifully done. I really love your character designs and the style. Great coloring with the earth tones. unique opening to this story...definitely intrigued. Waiting to see how this develops.

mookitty at 5:55AM, Dec. 7, 2007

omgosh! its so good!

DAJB at 1:04AM, Dec. 7, 2007

Nice start. Looking forward to seeing how this develops.

Lemniskate at 1:03AM, Dec. 7, 2007

A little bitter, isn't he? Very curious to learn what happened to Dien to become as he now is.