teasan at 2:41PM, Oct. 5, 2006

A good start to this story. I like your art, it's very striking. Seems like it will be an interesting story.

ZoeStead at 8:10AM, Oct. 3, 2006

Great artwork! And the colouring is neat too!

BigFishComic at 7:32PM, Oct. 2, 2006

it's pretty pretty.

teagle at 10:22AM, Oct. 2, 2006

Okay, so far it looks good.I'll have to see where the story takes me,But I'm intrigued... Mark

FarkingBush at 9:52AM, Oct. 2, 2006

which version of page 4 will you be going with?

insanelysane at 1:36AM, Oct. 2, 2006

once again, another nicely coloured page! I like how you did the grass and the rain. =) keep going!

SheaSummers at 12:57PM, Oct. 1, 2006

Don't know why. It's okay, as long as you're enjoying the comic.

FarkingBush at 12:49PM, Oct. 1, 2006

how come you have page 4 inked but not 3 o0? is shea getting lazy now?!

FarkingBush at 12:34PM, Oct. 1, 2006

your rating thing doesn't want to cooperate!

FarkingBush at 12:32PM, Oct. 1, 2006

hmm...

FarkingBush at 12:32PM, Oct. 1, 2006

forgot to rate it, sorry.

FarkingBush at 12:20PM, Oct. 1, 2006

love the rain, dude! love how you do that bush/tree thing too. i'll check out page 4 when it's colored.

Chris chris at 10:23AM, Oct. 1, 2006

looking good! :) Can't wait for more. sad beginning. :(