Hail to the Fuz!!!
drakkar on Sept. 15, 2009
i drew this in january of 08, i don't recal who it was at the time that the comunications guy was suposed to be, i think it was blake. the captain is my supervisor from the time, his name was mike. and yes, i'm the fuz, my nickname is fuzzy and this was a joke i had made at work one night.
*update*
headdesk*
i can't belive that page did that, it shouldn't have updated for a couple more weeks. yes folks, i started with a backlog. i appologise for waisting you nice folks time by not fixing that sooner.
drakkar at 2:50PM, Sept. 22, 2009
heh, the first part was basikly me picking at coworkers(former now) but it'll get a lil more serious as t progresses, but will keep some jokes. thanks for the tips, hopefully it'll do better, i still need to add to my backlog, most of my pages are still sketches.
theRedDeath at 8:32AM, Sept. 22, 2009
Hey there, got your message. Your comic is still early on, and you said you had a backlog, so i'm sure you've done a lot of learning on your own. So feel free to disregard anything I'm about to say: For one thing panel composition and page size needs work, you're kind of all over the place. Clearer panel boarders and page boarders would be nice too. When adding text, unless you're hand-writing it, add the word bubbles and narration boxes in AFTER you position the words where you want them to go. That way, the word's won't get so close to the bubble/box boarders and will read clearer. And don't draw the boxes with the mouse/stylus, instead just use the shape tool to create a box for you. If you want to change the box into an irregular shape, just use "distort" with free-transform. That's all just technical mumbo-jumbo. You're comic's not really far enough along for me to fairly say anything about the content. I can't tell yet if it's going to be a real space-drama, or a comedic send up featuring references to your friends, or both. So that might be something you would want to make clearer. Or not, that's a judgment call on your part. Keep up the comic! I'll keep on eye on it!