Chapter1_pg5
Annhialator on June 8, 2007
well another slow update just had to deal with a lot of hassle and sketching and preparing for things to come plus you know…work
After reading the book by Scott McCloud “Making Comics” it gave me some realizations to polish my overall comic to make it an immersive reading experience hopefully I'm doing a good job so far because I'm seriously considering in the far future to redraw the first chapter and intro when I get a consistent artstyle going, I still need some more time to reach there hopefully not too much. Anyways enjoy after the next few pages there'll be something new happening so stay tuned ;)
genozide at 1:49PM, June 9, 2007
This is the lesson for young ones, DO NOT SPILL KETCHUP on your shirt or your mama is gonna go CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BTW, nice job... one comment about the second panel's frame ... think the top line should go more parallel to the bottom line of the first panel, now the opposite angle created a 3D feeling for the 2nd one so it's more standing out than the 3rd panel which you would like the reader to focus on :) Cheers man!
simonitro at 12:28PM, June 9, 2007
Wait a second! Wasn't his name Elias and now Toni? Darn, she must've fell so hard on her head that she started to forget his name or maybe, she's getting deranged! Anyway, what's up with the blood on his shirt? Guess we have to read on to continue! Good thing you're still updating, most of us here thought that you have died or something!
Rockster1039 at 11:41AM, June 9, 2007
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