concept 5
Dark_Bullet on April 6, 2009
concept 5
Night explains a little about the Dragon Warrior Academy. Explaining that everyone is a certain age group and a little about what they do there.
Coope asks her about the city and she explains that as well. (also explains the huge shield around the city.)
option1: End Ch.1 after the explanation.
Option2: Keep going until the class is introduced.
(i'm more inclined to end it after the explanation, as Coope asks if he can see the complex's layout and everything.)
Kikirini at 1:16PM, April 7, 2009
I'd say keep going, seems a little short thus far. Not to mention, ending the chapter now would be a little abrupt.