Chapter 1 page 1
Toshiro AkA Whiety on Oct. 15, 2007
erm…sorry about the little bits of smudging.this was is my first proper comic page i know it's most likely to be horrible but plz be nice .
Toshiro AkA Whiety on Oct. 15, 2007
erm…sorry about the little bits of smudging.this was is my first proper comic page i know it's most likely to be horrible but plz be nice .
Master_Chief_Rules at 5:54AM, Oct. 23, 2007
There aren't really any obvious smudges... HOLD UP! "plz be nice"? You're the one that called someone a freak on a comic two clicks ago!? Regardless, the Inn street looks very ghetto and run down. He doesn't have that much of a choice.
n_y_japlander at 10:23AM, Oct. 17, 2007
One has to start someplace... and you are off to a good start! The smudges are not bad! (I did not see them untill I looked for them) Might need to work on lettering. Try writing the words first, then drawing the word bubbles around them, insted of trying to fit the words in the bubble after. Again, off to a great start!