Tony is just gonna have nightmares after this!
Might I offer some advice that was offered to me a long time ago?
When you write your dialogue, you might want to get some paper or a ruler and lay out some lines for the text so it doesn't wobble up and down (my hand-written text does the same thing, except it slopes downward too!)it may help the readability a bit. Hehe, your r's look like mine! If you'd like a little more advice PQ me and I'll try and set up a tutorial, I'd love to help ^_^ and I don't want you to think I'm being harsh on your comic either, I am enjoying it so far! I'm really worried for this character, eagerly awaiting the next page, and congrats on bringing it to DD!
Amelius at 6:50AM, Dec. 7, 2009
Tony is just gonna have nightmares after this! Might I offer some advice that was offered to me a long time ago? When you write your dialogue, you might want to get some paper or a ruler and lay out some lines for the text so it doesn't wobble up and down (my hand-written text does the same thing, except it slopes downward too!)it may help the readability a bit. Hehe, your r's look like mine! If you'd like a little more advice PQ me and I'll try and set up a tutorial, I'd love to help ^_^ and I don't want you to think I'm being harsh on your comic either, I am enjoying it so far! I'm really worried for this character, eagerly awaiting the next page, and congrats on bringing it to DD!