I think it'd be nice to be a squatter. You don't have to buy your own food. OK its official I suck at drawing backgrounds. Also from now on I am going to draw my speech bubbles because this was a failure :0
Hey, you too? We have somethin' in common.
Truth be told though, the backgrounds aren't that bad. The perspective in panel 3 is off, but other than that, this page is fine as far as BGs are concerned.
Backgrounds look very good to me, and they compliment the characters well. Only problem I see is a messed up perspective in the 4th panel; even though the camera is somewhat elevated, I think you'd see counters and walls instead of floors.
I also like the character designs. The slim bodies with slightly exaggerated heads can be tricky (at least for me), and your proportions are consistent. I also like the way the girl's hair isn't perfect. The loose strands of hair combined with her hoodie helps show she's in a rush (or just chill personality-wise).
Shirker at 7:49PM, May 11, 2011
Hey, you too? We have somethin' in common. Truth be told though, the backgrounds aren't that bad. The perspective in panel 3 is off, but other than that, this page is fine as far as BGs are concerned.
EssayBee at 8:34AM, Dec. 13, 2010
Backgrounds look very good to me, and they compliment the characters well. Only problem I see is a messed up perspective in the 4th panel; even though the camera is somewhat elevated, I think you'd see counters and walls instead of floors. I also like the character designs. The slim bodies with slightly exaggerated heads can be tricky (at least for me), and your proportions are consistent. I also like the way the girl's hair isn't perfect. The loose strands of hair combined with her hoodie helps show she's in a rush (or just chill personality-wise).
dragonrider at 4:05PM, Dec. 4, 2010
You're better at the art than I am people are recognizable as people and their actions show what they're doing.