749 Ambition
JillyFoo on Sept. 22, 2017
Right after last update I worked the script and thought this works well.
The story is very MC perspective driven, so Saturno's thoughts right away are “this is BS. I know what you are really getting at.” Hope with Saturno's thoughts interrupting her reveal still works.
I was working with the original script and thought it kinda sounded too much like what every comic does. The reveal and the character's shocked reaction.
Saturno feels that he already anticipated she is trying to convince him to return fully to their plan. Maybe he isn't fully processing what she is actually saying. His plan is shut down.
Is it true about the world? Heehee. ;)
It is a lot of what we know anyway. Anyone that tries to eat the world gets consumed by the world. Just like the god Saturno eats his own children to prevent them from taking over.
But this isn't the big reveal of this chapter…
Spikes at 3:22AM, Sept. 28, 2017
He still doesn't get it. She is not "slightly" stronger than him, she is leaps and bounds stronger. She is probably many decades, possibly centuries old, which means she most likely knows things no one else would. After all, only those who retreat to earth would still be alive to pass on the tale.
Jason Moon at 6:51PM, Sept. 22, 2017
hmmm very interesting. Scary if it's true