We can see that the eyes are closed... Once again don't tell the readers what the characters are doing... Let them say for themselves. Also it would have been funny for there to be sound effects of *skip* *skip* *skip* or something while she was skipping
globep at 11:56AM, Feb. 6, 2010
kill !
GrimReap at 10:11PM, May 17, 2008
We can see that the eyes are closed... Once again don't tell the readers what the characters are doing... Let them say for themselves. Also it would have been funny for there to be sound effects of *skip* *skip* *skip* or something while she was skipping