Ok the good:
1)The art isnââ¬â¢t bad and I can tell whatââ¬â¢s going on primarily.
2) The colors are well done and the boarder fits well.
The ok:
1) Well there are no backgrounds, I would suggest at least adding in a little more to the background to lay the seen.
2) While some panels give a good idea of whatââ¬â¢s going on and the mood the last one seems very awkward, it feels like they are both smiling and the sword is tapping him rather then hitting him. Iââ¬â¢m not sure if you wanted that affect.
3) There is a lack of text, I would suggest adding some but to much could be a bad thing.
The Bad:
1) Very random start and the combination of actions tells us very little especially with the expressions and actions conflicting.
I give it a 3 for being over all decent. Donââ¬â¢t take the 3 as a bad rating it just means some work could be used but you are on the right track.
Demagogue at 11:20PM, Jan. 29, 2007
Ok the good: 1)The art isnââ¬â¢t bad and I can tell whatââ¬â¢s going on primarily. 2) The colors are well done and the boarder fits well. The ok: 1) Well there are no backgrounds, I would suggest at least adding in a little more to the background to lay the seen. 2) While some panels give a good idea of whatââ¬â¢s going on and the mood the last one seems very awkward, it feels like they are both smiling and the sword is tapping him rather then hitting him. Iââ¬â¢m not sure if you wanted that affect. 3) There is a lack of text, I would suggest adding some but to much could be a bad thing. The Bad: 1) Very random start and the combination of actions tells us very little especially with the expressions and actions conflicting. I give it a 3 for being over all decent. Donââ¬â¢t take the 3 as a bad rating it just means some work could be used but you are on the right track.