SympleSymon at 6:46PM, Dec. 19, 2007

Good page

Nepath at 4:22PM, Sept. 3, 2007

Some thanks... @Fitz: Thanks for the comments, I was happy to get to this page because I can now get the story rolling and reveal some of Energize character. @ MEDUSA: Thanks. The picture is no relation to the story…it is a poster of a band that a couple of my mates are into, so it’s there for them really. @ lurch9944: Welcome back and thanks for remembering me. @Vindibudd: Thanks for the comments. Yes the story should start the develop more now, keep reading. As for the short arm thing, as he was leaning slightly towards the picture I took into account how much the arm would raise up, maybe I didn’t put that across well enough. Never mind. As for the tools, I am using an Intuos 3 A5 ( I assume that’s 6x4??) @TheMidge28: Im glad you said that, I have been playing around with my inking techniques and Panels 1 and 5 and the most part of 4 were done in my current and now preferred method. Panels 2, 3 and the head in panel 4 were done in my previous way which I felt was too rigid, so I agree with you. I’m trying to work it out. Glad your enjoying the story. @ Abt_Nihil: Thanks for your comments, greatly appreciated as always. @ DAJB: I agree, some of the best scenes in superhero comics are when they are kicking back. @ jmt: Thanks for your comments. Im pleased that the story is keeping your interest. @Rhykker, man in black, literacysuks1, Matalicman, Dchao: Thanks for your comments

Fitz at 8:50AM, Sept. 3, 2007

Like JMT, I instantly thought of Peter Parker, too. And that mask lying there like just like that, like a t-shirt you take off and throw wherever after the morning jogging - amusing in a way :) I agree, nice job on the first panel, but my favorite here is the last one, there's so many emotions in that face: one the one hand, tiredness, on the other, some sort of amusement.

MEDUSA at 3:14AM, Sept. 3, 2007

I LIKE THE PIK HANGIN ON THE WALL IN PANEL 1...ANY LINK TO THE STORY NEPATH?...OR IS IT JUS A NICE TOUCH LOL!!...

lurch9944 at 5:32PM, Sept. 2, 2007

Nice pages I haven't been on long been off doing other things but hopefully now i'll keep up with ya.

Vindibudd at 3:30PM, Sept. 2, 2007

Also man, make your arms the correct proportion. The hands should be hitting mid-thigh. Otherwise looks sexy. What WACOM are you using? I just got an Intuos 3 4x6.

Vindibudd at 3:29PM, Sept. 2, 2007

Now we are getting into something interesting.

Matalicman at 2:30PM, Sept. 2, 2007

GREAT STUFF!!!

Dchao at 1:10PM, Sept. 2, 2007

xD his hair is the smex

TheMidge28 at 1:07PM, Sept. 2, 2007

I like panel one and five...four is good too but the ones with the photo seemed...eh?...maybe too rigid...but I agree with everyone else with having this scene...grounds the story...great job!

Abt_Nihil at 12:25PM, Sept. 2, 2007

Panel 1 looks great, I think your shading has improved over the last pages too. The story is progressing nicely... and I agree with DAJB, action scenes are so much more powerful against an empathizable backdrop like domestic scenes.

DAJB at 12:12PM, Sept. 2, 2007

Nice page. In "Shades", I try to mix the action sequences with a lot of "domestic" touches, too. I think it helps to remind us all that super humans are humans as well as super. (Plus I just think it's cool seeing a super hero kick back in his bare feet!)

jmt at 11:50AM, Sept. 2, 2007

I always thought it was a touch of reality to show a superhero hanging out in his apt with his get up half on trying to relax after a hard day. This reminds me of Peter Parker or something. a very nice touch. And an interesting piece to the puzzle.

Rhykker at 11:45AM, Sept. 2, 2007

Very nice. Kudos.