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hitokaji on March 23, 2013
at 9:28PM, March 28, 2013
@PPP Thank you very much for your suggesting! I'll improve the sound effect issue in later pages. :)
at 11:56AM, March 28, 2013
Not over the sound of his bodily fluids flooding out of him. Oh and speaking of sound effects. Have you thought of making some of them larger. Like in panel 3, it could help set the mood better if the rumble was written bigger or in a more provacative color.
at 3:34AM, March 26, 2013
at 2:28AM, March 26, 2013
@Razzy : Oh, thank you for letting me know! I always worry about wordings and sound effects. :D
at 9:47PM, March 25, 2013
the "GRRR" on the last page wasn't out of place at all! I just often find any sound effects humorous in comics because I sometimes read them like speech instead of like sound :) I always go back and make it sound right in my head!
the story and wording are awesome!