Fusion #16 Page 17
EssayBee on Sept. 24, 2019
Here's page 17 of Fusion #16, and a bit of Men in Black vibe with Whistler's line. Yu'ulawren has just about brought everyone up to speed so we can get on with the story.
One of the problems of beginning a story with a newbie like Fusion is that there are times when a lot of the history of her world (and the history of its people) come into play. Sometimes there's a lot of past events driving the “simple” events of the present.
hkmaly at 12:58PM, Sept. 24, 2019
"Problem"? Considering the alternative is that everyone will know what is talked about EXCEPT READERS, I wouldn't label it problem. Some authors work hard on getting some newbie who can ask questions readers are interested in ...
giovanni at 6:23AM, Sept. 24, 2019
lots of reveal
scv01 at 2:45AM, Sept. 24, 2019
Great work!