Chapter 23 page 05

mlai on April 17, 2019

posted by edbang

art by edbang, story by mlai, justnopoint and edbang

Got 3 things to mention about this page.

1. Are Nuada's shoulders. They used to have rectangular protrusions, but I prefer to draw them as triangles now. I find it looks better and is easier to remember how to draw them. I started doing it on the last page of chapter 22.

2. The oscilloscope grid. Before it was just the middle wave, but it looked so plain so I added the wave on top and bottom, and some weird circles to make it look like Nuada was analyzing the data in real time.

3. The weird perspective at the bottom panel. Thought it'd be cool if the broken cyborg would view these guys in a warped perspective. Csmr out ok, but I wanted it to be a more circular perspective. Kind of like a fishlens perspective. Mlai pointed out my weak knowledge of anatomy by saying that the pants are close to the belly button. Grateful he pointed that out, as it was something I never thought of before. If any of the abs I drew up until then looked ok, it was out of pure luck.

drawn on a yoga book Lenovo YB1-X91F, windows 10, v1809, Clip Studio Paint Pro