There's a whole big chunk of dialogue missing from a panel that's not shown. Read this between panels 1 & 2.
Mike: ANYWAY, IT TOOK SOME TIME, BUT I WAS ABLE TO CONVINCE MY DAD TO SELL ME THE PLACE. JACOB AND I ARE GOING TO TURN IT INTO A LITTLE BED AND BREAKFAST INN. JACOB LIKES IT HERE AND THEREââ¬â¢S PLENTY OF ROOM FOR HIM TO GO EXPLORING.
Amanda: SOUNDS GREAT. I WONDERED IF ANYONE WOULD EVER LIVE HERE AGAIN.
Amanda: HOW IS YOUR DAD? I HAVENââ¬â¢T SEEN ANY OF THE FAMILY IN AT LEAST TEN YEARS.
And that balloon in panel 1 should be pointing towardJacob instead of Mike.
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Nikai Nockturne at 2:19PM, Feb. 15, 2007
That makes sense. It'd be cute if they did.
Bobby Nash at 2:11PM, Feb. 15, 2007
There's a whole big chunk of dialogue missing from a panel that's not shown. Read this between panels 1 & 2. Mike: ANYWAY, IT TOOK SOME TIME, BUT I WAS ABLE TO CONVINCE MY DAD TO SELL ME THE PLACE. JACOB AND I ARE GOING TO TURN IT INTO A LITTLE BED AND BREAKFAST INN. JACOB LIKES IT HERE AND THEREââ¬â¢S PLENTY OF ROOM FOR HIM TO GO EXPLORING. Amanda: SOUNDS GREAT. I WONDERED IF ANYONE WOULD EVER LIVE HERE AGAIN. Amanda: HOW IS YOUR DAD? I HAVENââ¬â¢T SEEN ANY OF THE FAMILY IN AT LEAST TEN YEARS. And that balloon in panel 1 should be pointing towardJacob instead of Mike. Bobby Fuzzy Writer From Hell www.bobbynash.com www.myspace.com/bobbynash www.comicspace.com/bobbynash
Maulgryve at 10:05AM, Feb. 15, 2007
This one's dialog is hard to understand. Other than that it's the same great stuff I love.