cres0055 at 10:26PM, Nov. 1, 2013

O didn't mean it as criticism just engaging with the story. Going like what if... and what really will be most likely.

dragonsong12 at 9:51AM, July 8, 2013

Haha, yeah. I swear this all seemed like it worked when I initially wrote out the script, but man, when I was going to post the page I was like, "this really doesn't make sense, does it?...Well, it's a little late now" *posts* Here's hoping it'll read better when people don't have to wait a week between pages. XD Thanks for sticking with me, though! :D

cres0055 at 2:07AM, July 8, 2013

So the way to kill the keeper is break into her apartment and ask her to go to the outskirts of town then tell her she has to go on alone. But I think this girl is good and this will work out good for her. Great page.