Now what happens next?
Product Placement on Feb. 6, 2008
More text. Yay.
Now if you want an insight into the world the story takes place in, I would recommend that you read it.
Fractions
Product Placement on Feb. 6, 2008
More text. Yay.
Now if you want an insight into the world the story takes place in, I would recommend that you read it.
evan_e_hill at 9:33PM, Aug. 9, 2008
cool stuff. im curious where its going. the dialouge is good, but maybe a way to make it better would be if you could in some way have the same typical conversation, but by that conversation, we could understand some of the subtle or even large differences in this sci fi world as opposed to our own times. as it stands, i think you could transplant this coversation, almost verbatum, to a modern times story. does that make sense? just a thought. i cant write to save my life so take this for what its worth. interesting stuff. look forward to seeing more.