From The Wind

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nogimic on April 22, 2008

Okay, I stopped the madness with the lens glares :)
Instead, now it's a darker mood…well at the least for Polyphemus's past part!

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yo mamma at 3:45PM, April 28, 2008

Nice!

IWontGetOvertheDam at 2:30PM, April 24, 2008

I'm likin' it. Fave'd.

Katsu at 8:44AM, April 24, 2008

I like the art, it is nice and clean. The lens flare was a bit much however (which has already been mentioned). Also, the text is difficult to read. One tip I learned is that people can read all capital letters better than capitals and under case. I think if you change that, you'll be rock'n!

Frae at 8:19AM, April 24, 2008

It's a really cute comic. I like the art style. It's is clean and simple. The font sometimes is a bit hard to read though. I'm going to favorite this out of curiosity.

Jules at 7:43AM, April 24, 2008

--oh, and I fav'd it too

Jules at 7:39AM, April 24, 2008

yeah nice comic so far (and thanks for the comment)

Aaronwing at 7:38AM, April 24, 2008

It oddly reminds me of The Odyssey, don't really know why. It really is cute, but to give you an honest critique, it's a little hard to read. I end end reading it like Shatner, and as cute as the heads are they honestly make no sense to me. Sorry, I'm huge into story comics. A very nice job otherwise. I hope you continue getting better.

KAM at 12:10AM, April 24, 2008

After all those white backgrounds the black makes a nice change of pace. It was pointed out to me when I started posting to the web that pure white backgrounds can be hard on the eyes. I've found that even a very light color fill can be useful in cutting the glare. Good luck! :-)

spitfire_hokage at 9:51PM, April 23, 2008

[color=red]All I have to say is what Euron said(except the fav'd part because I already fav'd this).[/color]

nogimic at 8:48PM, April 23, 2008

tplusr, I don't think she was in the Odyssey, it's really vague in my head if the cyclops section included her, but I sorta knew who she was beforehand. :)