Page 02
MMMelody on April 13, 2009
So, I actually had this page done and colored a month ago, but when I went to look at it, I realized how lazy and crappy looking the background was. Here, see for yourself, haha…
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/7651/fsa02linessmdh6.jpg
Needless to say, the new background took all day, but it was sooo worth it. I like the painting style I used, it's gritty. So I think I'm going to go back and add for detail to Page 01 and paint it in a similar manner.
I notice that a lot of western comics generally put a lot more panels on a page than I feel comfortable with. Thus, my story seems to be developing much slower than it probably should. Do my pages seem too sparse to you guys? Any advice?
taltamir at 7:27PM, Oct. 22, 2009
OMFG! Steam powered watch! >.< This really takes the whole "steampunk" to a whole new level.
Ryan_Scott at 6:01PM, April 17, 2009
I'm with Amanda... you're the one telling the story here Melody!!! Looks great though!
Avie at 11:31PM, April 15, 2009
Gorgeous work !
amanda at 11:27AM, April 15, 2009
Ultimately, put as many panels in as you're comfortable with - you get to determine the pacing of the story, and we're simply at your mercy ^.^