One additional thing to work on would be shoulders from the side view. Remember to draw the top of them, a curved line, even from a side point of view. Otherwise, they tend to look flat and attatched to the body, or resemble a kite, which you don't want.
I can tell you are putting effort into this, so take some time and draw your main characters over and over again to nail down your style. Remember, everyone is unique.
I like the size and shape of the ears in the first panel, I'd say around that size is healthy to make it look most proffessional compared to the size of his head.
Don't be afraid to draw trash or papers or tiles on the ground. You don't want it to look like he's floating in mid-air, though a do enjoy the tail wagging effect. XD
You're off to a good start! Keep at it and you'll improve rapidly as you explore your own skills. Remember, we all start humbly and with only so much talent. Practice practice practice, and you'll see yourself get better quickly. :)
As a fellow fur, I must say, this doesn't look too bad.
As far as the anatomy goes, it's okay, but needs a bit of touch up and the text bubbles a little hard to read (it's the text itself).
Try and straighten out the lines and keep everything in place and everything will look good.
But, keep it up, you're doing fine for only two pages.
harkovast at 9:05AM, April 6, 2009
He needs to calm down with the tail wagging. People will get the wrong idea!
Az_the_Wox at 8:09AM, July 2, 2008
One additional thing to work on would be shoulders from the side view. Remember to draw the top of them, a curved line, even from a side point of view. Otherwise, they tend to look flat and attatched to the body, or resemble a kite, which you don't want. I can tell you are putting effort into this, so take some time and draw your main characters over and over again to nail down your style. Remember, everyone is unique. I like the size and shape of the ears in the first panel, I'd say around that size is healthy to make it look most proffessional compared to the size of his head. Don't be afraid to draw trash or papers or tiles on the ground. You don't want it to look like he's floating in mid-air, though a do enjoy the tail wagging effect. XD You're off to a good start! Keep at it and you'll improve rapidly as you explore your own skills. Remember, we all start humbly and with only so much talent. Practice practice practice, and you'll see yourself get better quickly. :)
Kiruru at 12:26PM, June 5, 2008
Why Thank you, it nice to here from another fur ^_^
Priest_Revan at 11:15PM, June 4, 2008
As a fellow fur, I must say, this doesn't look too bad. As far as the anatomy goes, it's okay, but needs a bit of touch up and the text bubbles a little hard to read (it's the text itself). Try and straighten out the lines and keep everything in place and everything will look good. But, keep it up, you're doing fine for only two pages.