003 - Welcome To Womanhood
Anch0vy on Sept. 23, 2006
Ah the girls. Yes if you read the sign in the window right they do work in ‘Kinky Winky Sex Shop’. These two are to be based on the staff at my local Ann Summers Sex Shop, who are overly up-front about the sex toys and shit. Anyway, I'm looking into ways to improve Matilda cause her hair is a little TOO in the way.
Once again, making it to my third comic is a big thing, if I make it too 10, you know this is gonna be a lng running series (my last series ran for over 170 strips and only stopped due to events in my life)
Anch0vy at 9:35PM, Sept. 24, 2006
Yeah, I need to look into ways to improve there movement. Thanks for taking the time to comment :-)
lefarce at 9:32PM, Sept. 24, 2006
The panels are static for the amount of speech. There is a lack of emotion in this due to the characters retaining the same poses frame by frame. It's OK for small periods of time to build comedic value, but it fails when your making a far more complex joke. Now they did move... a little bit. But not enough to give off the emotion that youre trying to convey.