Yup. The page looks great, but the typos are a wee bit distracting.
"OUR FORCES ARE MAKING THEIR DESCEND ON YOUR PLANET" -> "OUR FORCES ARE MAKING THEIR DESCEN[T] [TO] YOUR PLANET"
"ACT OF BRUTALITY YOUR ANCESTOR SOW" -> "ACT(S) OF BRUTALITY YOUR ANCESTOR(S) SOW(ED)" (I'm pretty sure that there's more than one ancestor)
Anyway, lookin' good!
The Real Macabre at 9:32AM, Jan. 3, 2009
Yup. The page looks great, but the typos are a wee bit distracting. "OUR FORCES ARE MAKING THEIR DESCEND ON YOUR PLANET" -> "OUR FORCES ARE MAKING THEIR DESCEN[T] [TO] YOUR PLANET" "ACT OF BRUTALITY YOUR ANCESTOR SOW" -> "ACT(S) OF BRUTALITY YOUR ANCESTOR(S) SOW(ED)" (I'm pretty sure that there's more than one ancestor) Anyway, lookin' good!
harkovast at 7:02PM, Jan. 1, 2009
You need to work on the typos, there are a couple on this second page.