(old) Chapter 1 Page 03
littlerain on Oct. 28, 2008
Alright a lot is happening in this page.. Lots of text and all the conversation except the last panel is pointless. Well I guess we learn her name…
I LOVE how the sandwich came out this entire page! I thought it was going to end up terrible and not like it was actually in plastic…just a brown and green blob. It was also the last thing I colored because I was afraid of doing it…I hope you like this plastic sandwich friend. Too bad he has already been eaten…
The Derkomai at 1:15PM, Dec. 6, 2008
kawaiiiii
Lilac at 12:52PM, Nov. 23, 2008
I love his expression when he's munching on the sandwich.
littlerain at 12:50PM, Oct. 29, 2008
Yeah she is more just peeved that he left than she is about the sandwich... Originally her bubble there said 'This guy took my sandwich and left' but I thought the 'and left' part was too wordy because it was obvious, that after taking a sandwich you would leave, so I took it out....hm now I guess it does look like she is more angry about the sandwich..... This is briefly addressed later (I think pg 16...)so maybe that will make her seem less complacent about the whole thing.
Aghammer at 10:22AM, Oct. 29, 2008
Interesting overlay with the last panel. She kinda gave him the food.. so she can't complain :D Although vanishing completely without a goodbye is kinda rude! Nice work.