I Like the clean page display, each panel is easly be able to know what the character is thinking, and saying.
Plus the style of the character is nicely drawn as well...
I've seen the next pages and noticed you took out the eye color..
I think you didn't add after awhile cause of the bold color effect.
If your going to create eye color, it's good to go into different shades. A light touch on the surface, and add detail after.. Like lens flare effect on the dot, or a dot with a soft glow around the gleam. ^^
But I do like this page, I think it's about how introductions comes around.. Hehe.. new student, a new mystery. ^.^
(plus I'm getting into the newly drawn facial expressions, you've enhanced over time)O.O
~M~
Yashy at 6:34PM, March 25, 2009
I really like the way you draw teh chraters 8D i cant draw to save my life!!!
Nigellashade at 5:02AM, July 25, 2008
I Like the clean page display, each panel is easly be able to know what the character is thinking, and saying. Plus the style of the character is nicely drawn as well... I've seen the next pages and noticed you took out the eye color.. I think you didn't add after awhile cause of the bold color effect. If your going to create eye color, it's good to go into different shades. A light touch on the surface, and add detail after.. Like lens flare effect on the dot, or a dot with a soft glow around the gleam. ^^ But I do like this page, I think it's about how introductions comes around.. Hehe.. new student, a new mystery. ^.^ (plus I'm getting into the newly drawn facial expressions, you've enhanced over time)O.O ~M~
Crazy Dutchman at 6:48AM, Nov. 2, 2007
Green eyes are awesome. I wonder where this story will be going :)
nonnymouse at 5:21AM, Oct. 31, 2007
hahaha h8u2? thats gr8!!!! but finish ai kurai too! *faves an 5's*
Sadako at 3:49PM, Oct. 27, 2007
I like how you only color the eyes :B Nice first page! :D
blueyes at 2:00PM, Oct. 27, 2007
I'm a little confused as to why you only color the eyes... But I love the clean cut feeling of your style. Very organized!