Icysapphire at 5:55PM, Jan. 2, 2007

Man, I LOVE the way you changed this one! It seems a lot more menacing and suspensful with all the colors and the way you can't see what the text is telling you! The art is also a great improvement over the old version. Great job, Dai! ^^

Mina_Lunga at 5:26PM, Jan. 2, 2007

I'd agree with peoples that the menace is clearer when it ISN'T being seen, as you've done in the top panel. Text still looks to pixelated for my taste.

Rina_ran at 4:30PM, Jan. 2, 2007

Wow, it's really cool you redid these pages. They're exceedingly better in so many ways. I say coloring stands out quite a lot as something that has changed.

emjee at 1:01PM, Jan. 2, 2007

big big differance. This is really cool to see the two beginnings at once

Nigellashade at 10:17AM, Jan. 2, 2007

This is very interesting to see..The telling of this story is extraordinary to see in an enhanced visuals you've created.. O.O Very lovely style within the remakes.. ~M~ v~~~~~v

daidaishar at 6:05PM, Jan. 31, 2006

yeah, but yours pulled off the myth-style simplistic drawings a lot better than mine

Cheeko at 4:42PM, Jan. 31, 2006

Oooo...those are some SWEET eyes! Very cool! This reminds me a lot of the beginning to my own comic. :D