Issue 3 page 9
bravo1102 on July 22, 2013
Back to the bridge. There are about two more weeks of pages left and no photos after that.
Looking back I seem to have had trouble keeping my font sizes straight. I really should write this stuff down, but I always forget where I wrote it let alone whether I did or not. I'm trying to avoid the “stuffed into a corner” look of some of the panels and speech balloons. Sometimes I screw myself and the dead space in the photo intended for the speech balloons gets cropped instead to fit the page layout. Stinks.
After the latest re-write we are approaching the halfway point of the script. So in your literature class graph this would be culmination of the rising action and identification of the conflict that needs to be resolved to end the story.
bravo1102 at 9:52PM, July 22, 2013
The crew has lost control of navigation. Their course is being set from engineering.
El Cid at 6:23PM, July 22, 2013
Wouldn't the correct protocol be to fly that puppy into the nearest star or black hole?
Banes at 9:50AM, July 22, 2013
AH! They're coming to Earth!
jerrie at 8:56AM, July 22, 2013
well...those ugly beast girls have good bodies...we could put a bag over their heads and....never mind. lets just kill them.
bravo1102 at 1:17AM, July 22, 2013
Not if Wes Norwood can help it!
plymayer at 1:08AM, July 22, 2013
If they take engineering they'll be free to throw slumber parties and gawd knows what! Looks like they want to go to earth! We can not let that happen - we would have half nakid ugly faced folks running all over the place!