Chapter 3 Page 1
draconia11 on Feb. 3, 2009
Ok, so I know there may be too much black in this page, but I wanted to illustrate from Chiel's view what it was like when she was waking up.
Just in case you didn't know, the thing on the ceiling is a surgical light.
I squeezed this in at the last minute, so if I ever get time I might fix it up. ^^
Enjoy!
GoGo Ghosty at 11:33AM, March 3, 2009
there isn't too much balck...it looks fine
Darlo at 8:18AM, Feb. 15, 2009
Very nice. Perhaps a blur on the first box (like looking through tired eyes (and eye lashes)) would help set the POV a little more.
parkbenchbook at 1:56PM, Feb. 14, 2009
I don't see anything to fix. It's a very creative way of framing.
Akki333 at 10:30AM, Feb. 8, 2009
hospital?
TheFlyingGreenMonkey at 11:57PM, Feb. 6, 2009
I like the eye opening, very cool.
Yukiei at 10:23PM, Feb. 6, 2009
*gasp* i love unpredictable stories like these! X3 can't wait for the next page!
Unigirl at 11:43AM, Feb. 5, 2009
I guess this is bad news for Chiel.
Avie at 10:18PM, Feb. 4, 2009
Great page ! The view was illustrated well !
plymayer at 8:29PM, Feb. 4, 2009
This doesn't bode well for Chiel! Looks like a very bright light...
ShinuZero at 6:14PM, Feb. 4, 2009
awesome effect!
Sei at 6:05PM, Feb. 4, 2009
Oh, very cool way of interpreting through her perspective. I think it pulled off nicely :3.
Kinuchio at 5:57PM, Feb. 4, 2009
That's a really good looking surgical light. ;O