Teh good...
- It's at least sorta competantly drawn
Teh BAD!11! >:(
- The inking is sloppy and often times looks rushed.
- The fourth wall was broken. It is there for a reason. Breaking it isn't funny or clever.
- The joke is your typical "OMG! u dumass author!" thing.
- The page is very big. Shrink it!
- While B&W can work, this looks very barren. You need to either draw backgrounds, color your guys, or do something to make this look less boring.
TheCreator10490 at 7:42PM, Dec. 8, 2009
lol looks fun :3 *faved*
Rich at 4:32PM, Oct. 29, 2006
Teh good... - It's at least sorta competantly drawn Teh BAD!11! >:( - The inking is sloppy and often times looks rushed. - The fourth wall was broken. It is there for a reason. Breaking it isn't funny or clever. - The joke is your typical "OMG! u dumass author!" thing. - The page is very big. Shrink it! - While B&W can work, this looks very barren. You need to either draw backgrounds, color your guys, or do something to make this look less boring.