Chapter02 PG04
Zimeta on July 31, 2014
Must've been a very large sum. Weren't the days before caller ID magical?
I have a feeling this isn't the last time Otto's going to hear whatever that offer was.
I
chose my dialogue and expressions carefully so that I wouldn't have to
resort to the unrealistic cliche of having Otto repeat everything the
person on the other line is saying. I guess I could've drawn a speech
balloon coming out of the phone so you could actually “hear” what's
being said as an alternate to this, but I think the mystery of the
person on the other line is better this way.
Drawing the expressions was fun. We go from irritation, to surprise, to incredulousness, to sarcasm.
Zimeta at 11:33AM, Aug. 2, 2014
Thanks! Good to know. ^.^
Call Me Tom at 7:13AM, Aug. 1, 2014
For what it's worth I think you did wonderfully with the dialogue!