Page 3
Daiconv on Feb. 6, 2008
Lot's of frustration with page 3. There's a lot of extra panels edited out because It was taking too many pages to explain Paige's backstory. I want to hurry and get the back story out of the way so that we can get the meat of the comic. In my original plan there were six ninjas, but four is just as good I guess.
obiwan at 7:34AM, March 11, 2008
Hurrying? That's last panel was very "Dragonball Z" Excellent work!
Loud_G at 7:07AM, Feb. 29, 2008
Excellent layout here. I'd say your frustrated efforts were well worth it! I'm liking the story progression too. :)