Piss Police
Kaeko on Aug. 20, 2008
Scene: Then…standing to her feet, she leans against the wall with the stranger. “What's a kid doin' here?” She asks him, he was rather short, quite a fuzz ball to his appearance. She knew the eyepatch though, he probably had battles in his past.
By this scoff, it was easily know, he didn't like to be called a “kid” he spoke, “I–” There was only a split pause before his gaze connected to her chest, staring and continuing his words, “Need a hug?” She kinda raise a brow just catching him, before he correcting himself. “Kinda got myself into trouble”
After a quick explaination, she'd come to realize he was attacked while taking a piss, with no time to react he was stripped of his weapons and sent to the very cell they were in. She thought a moment, ‘but how did I get here..’
heh, continuing slowly ^^ hope yaiba likes it, x3 haha.
Goju to yaiba
Kaeko to kaeko
The_Jade_Fox at 1:18PM, Aug. 21, 2008
I like your characters and the plot. Ive read alot more Im just comenting herr. The only thing that bugs me is your lines. It looks very rough. I love this though. Its very origanal and inventive. Keep up the good work.