Page 11: issue 4 - A Saucerful of Secrets

shastab24 on April 17, 2012

An experience so good it makes Julie slip into other languages. I used Babelfish for the Spanish, and it may show. It's not like it's a program that's known for accurate translations. Heck, I tried a few times on some of the text so that it wasn't completely bungled. And I had to work around some simple words Babelfish refused to translate.

In panel three, Jenny's back! Sorry, had to make a pun there. Anyways, I wanted to draw her putting on an article of clothing, but found I couldn't do it. But hey, there is a sexiness to her back there. Red Mind is out of view, but he's still in the room. I also wanted to draw Julie with her costume on askew, but I realize that if passing through the doorway will put you in your costume, it'll probably adjust it, too. That's to say nothing of the fact that she essentially could have gone through the doorway naked and still been clothed in the bar.

While I wanted to show that Eiderdown is not a chaste hero, I never wanted to show exactly what happened. For one, I want to keep the T rating on this comic for as long as possible (though I do wonder if I may force myself into an M due to some content I may wish to delve into–and I never want to force it into an A rating). Also, it's good to leave some things to the imagination. That's not to say I don't envision what happened in there, but I'll never depict it in this comic (though I may draw it for anybody that might want to commission me for it–though I wouldn't know why anybody would want to pay for my art ).

Tomorrow: Red Mind gives some parting words to Eiderdown.