Page 18: issue 11 - Remember a Day

shastab24 on Nov. 27, 2012

I'm putting together a crossover project for next year which will run through multiple comics and also try to benefit the Hero Initiative. If you want to join in on the crossover fun, e-mail me at karamesser@hotmail.com or PQ me on this site. You don't exactly have a deadline to sign up, but the sooner you do, the better you can guide your comic through the storyline and the more immediately you can get the cool crossovers set up.

Heroes Alliance is currently running chapter 7, which was written by myself. It's over halfway done with its epic length and features a lot of great art. Check it out here on Drunk Duck!

And check out Trans Dimensional Trans Superheroes, my new community project comic, also on Drunk Duck!

Onto the page at hand: So I hope it's obvious what's happening–Tempore's action has begun to take effect. Why isn't it yellow on the edge? In part because I can't fade it right like that, but also because I really like it better this way. The last page had the yellow in part for consistency with how Tempore's power has worked so far. It's possible I'll tweak it later for print, but I doubt it.
Also, we see the superheroes again, and all in one panel! It was a bit annoying to draw because I don't usually draw very many characters on a page, and I later went to the 501 and realized I drew the bar too long. But oh well. I had also considered having this page without dialogue, but realize it's confusing enough with it that it would be really hard to determine without it. Besides, I liked the idea of actually reading the line the Swimmer is using on Eiderdown. It's corny, but it's working in this circumstance. Of course, considering Eiderdown has a drink in hand, this may simply be working because her inhibitions are down and Eiderdown was going to flirt with the Swimmer anyways. But I also put in a reference to the Heroes Alliance story. Of course, this does let people know all the Unlimited characters survive it, but I'm sure that was a given.