Ch. 2 - Pg. 27
jgib99 on Dec. 14, 2012
Sorry this page came in a little late. This one gave me a hard time, especially panel one. It still looks kinda messed up.
Thanks for the comments on the last page. And to answer olinn's question, the beam is indeed curving down. I should've had the fourth panel beam coming down a little more.
Thanks for reading KE!! I'll see ya on Tuesday for the next update. Have a great weekend!!
photobyjt at 8:12AM, Dec. 17, 2012
LOL! 5
softspot at 12:17PM, Dec. 14, 2012
I think you overdid a bit with the stripes around the explosion in that first frame. You know the saying "less is more"? Otherwise this page is OK with me. :-)
KimLuster at 5:39AM, Dec. 14, 2012
thumbs up!
Kou the Mad at 1:39AM, Dec. 14, 2012
good luck with that.