AmeliaP at 6:31PM, Feb. 17, 2018

Hmm, it opens another question to me. I love (US) comics, but one of the elements that annoys me is their short scenes. It doesn't give me time to care about the situation like I do in mangas and European (mainly Franco-Belgian comics) comics, so some scenes in my story are a little longer than the "standard" (assuming there is a standard haha. My favorite US comics don't suffer from it).

AmeliaP at 6:01PM, Feb. 17, 2018

Yeah!!! I designed this scene to be pretty tense, but with some pretty funny parts too, like this "smack talking" they're doing at the end of the chat. The double-crossing reached a point it became funny. Mainly because very dramatic stories can become pretty ridiculous in some parts if it's taking itself too seriously, for me XD Unfortunately, I think this effect will be lost in the printed edition. Here, there are 3 pages a week. In a printed edition, people tend to read faster, and they won't catch it

AmeliaP at 5:53PM, Feb. 17, 2018

And Andy will collect the bounty.

AmeliaP at 5:52PM, Feb. 17, 2018

Oh yeah! It may backfire on him. Maybe not... Did I say I hate him? "it keeps me on the edge of my seat!"XD Thank you! :)

AmeliaP at 10:09AM, Feb. 16, 2018

Who's bad XD

AmeliaP at 10:08AM, Feb. 16, 2018

He's smart, when calm.

AmeliaP at 10:07AM, Feb. 16, 2018

You're right. They all forget about the Kings Club and what they're doing there.