This page was… difficult. Some of the panels are memories Koji is having. The first one is when he moved to Rockview and Tadhg greeted him in broken Japanese. 11 year old Tadhg is adorable. The second memory happened the summer before the comic takes place. They're standing behind Koji's garage.
Notice the huge difference in reaction between Koji thinking he killed himself and Koji thinking he caused someone else's death. ) :
@ SoulSymph: I'm glad it's easier to follow then I thought. : B
@ Castle Pokemetriod: It was one of those things where [i]I[/i] could follow it and then at the last second I remembered that I'm the derpass that reads things backwards sometimes so I shouldn't be so sure it was obvious. >>;
@ Alwinbot: YOu're too nice.-heart-
@Everyone else: YOu guys are great! Thank you! : 3
Maybe those panels should have some sort of cloudy borders instead of the normal straight lines, or something, to make it more obvious, if you're that worried.
I didn't have a problem noticing that those were flashback scenes.
If you're worried that it wasn't clear those were memories, don't worry. No confusion.
Very nice page. The dialogue/thoughts really make you feel for Koji :[
AKT at 2:25PM, March 8, 2011
D:
Dodger at 4:39AM, March 8, 2011
@ Shirker: Tadhg is half Japanese and an idiot. : B And Thanks!
Shirker at 9:29PM, March 7, 2011
Heh, heh. Racism. Don't worry, the flashbacks weren't a problem. Can't wait to see more. I'm on the edge of my seat over here.
MiresuKun at 7:26PM, March 7, 2011
Woah, I just realized I have a jacket just like Koji's... Oh no, where is heeee?! I love this comic. :U
Dodger at 7:17PM, March 7, 2011
@ SoulSymph: I'm glad it's easier to follow then I thought. : B @ Castle Pokemetriod: It was one of those things where [i]I[/i] could follow it and then at the last second I remembered that I'm the derpass that reads things backwards sometimes so I shouldn't be so sure it was obvious. >>; @ Alwinbot: YOu're too nice.-heart- @Everyone else: YOu guys are great! Thank you! : 3
alwinbot at 6:56PM, March 7, 2011
can't wait till this gets featured.
Castle Pokemetroid at 6:36PM, March 7, 2011
Maybe those panels should have some sort of cloudy borders instead of the normal straight lines, or something, to make it more obvious, if you're that worried. I didn't have a problem noticing that those were flashback scenes.
SoulSymph at 5:43PM, March 7, 2011
If you're worried that it wasn't clear those were memories, don't worry. No confusion. Very nice page. The dialogue/thoughts really make you feel for Koji :[
CelestialTeez at 2:03PM, March 7, 2011
wow...that sucks
Sayomi at 8:17AM, March 7, 2011
Yes, I would feel a lot worse thinking I killed someone rather than thinking I killed myself. Awesome as always.
JazylH at 6:16AM, March 7, 2011
Great page!