Really nice. I saw this on the forums and thought it was worth a read.
I can't give it full points because your dots do make the page a little messy a bit on this one. I can also see a background grid which kinda takes my eye away from the characters themselves. Your speech bubbles also look kinda like they were pasted onto the background.
No offense or anything, of course.
cats10 at 6:48PM, Oct. 1, 2007
Ah no offense taken =3. Constructive Crit is always good. =3. I'll take note to use less distracting tones
Priest_Revan at 6:45PM, Oct. 1, 2007
Really nice. I saw this on the forums and thought it was worth a read. I can't give it full points because your dots do make the page a little messy a bit on this one. I can also see a background grid which kinda takes my eye away from the characters themselves. Your speech bubbles also look kinda like they were pasted onto the background. No offense or anything, of course.