02 - Chapter One
lynnlamora on June 14, 2008
You may notice that from here to the end of the chapter my style changed so much that even the clothing and character design will change - do not fear! It's all for the better I assure you! :)
If you want to know more about the characters and world of Lamora feel free to visit my DeviantArt page!
http://lynnlamora.deviantart.com/
Annie2495 at 9:09PM, May 15, 2009
Oh, very action-packed. I love the art!
tRickityHouses at 8:32PM, Sept. 11, 2008
that water looks cool, nice close ups. and yeah the text is abit rough but i think you get better right?
DAJB at 11:37PM, June 15, 2008
One small suggestion - if I were you, I'd use a smaller font size, to keep the text away from the sides of the balloons. That's all. Nice action-packed start!