Hello there, you have a really nice comic. I like the backgrounds and stuff. You're story is very interesting, and it is coming together pretty well!
I do have a few suggestions:
-Proofread Spelling and Grammer, no lowercase 'i' for example.
-Your text is fine: Arial, Times New Roman, easy to read text is good for a comic! I would make it a little larger though, and include word bubbles. For example, that question mark in the third panel is hard to see.
-I like the size of this page better then the last page. It was easier for me to read.
-I like the size of the bottom two panels better than the smaller panels too, but that is just me.
-Need to add panels: Dark Colored Lines or light colored lines when the background is dark, to seperate each part of the comic page! Just like you're reading a comic book! Right now the backgrounds are all together, and its like one big world.
-I really like your comic, it is very creative. I do hope my comments help you with you're spriting. I'm gonna add this comic to my favorites!
marineman611 at 12:07AM, Aug. 18, 2010
em you lasy bastard your not updating lol and i agree with ettie your doing sprite comix now work
Ettie at 1:26PM, July 12, 2010
Hello there, you have a really nice comic. I like the backgrounds and stuff. You're story is very interesting, and it is coming together pretty well! I do have a few suggestions: -Proofread Spelling and Grammer, no lowercase 'i' for example. -Your text is fine: Arial, Times New Roman, easy to read text is good for a comic! I would make it a little larger though, and include word bubbles. For example, that question mark in the third panel is hard to see. -I like the size of this page better then the last page. It was easier for me to read. -I like the size of the bottom two panels better than the smaller panels too, but that is just me. -Need to add panels: Dark Colored Lines or light colored lines when the background is dark, to seperate each part of the comic page! Just like you're reading a comic book! Right now the backgrounds are all together, and its like one big world. -I really like your comic, it is very creative. I do hope my comments help you with you're spriting. I'm gonna add this comic to my favorites!