Beh, I felt like making uneven panels, so I did. I'm not gonna make any more stuff with these guys basically because I don't want to. My attention span lasts one page. So from now on, it's one page then on to the next idea! Yeah. You'll see. On Friday.
I agree that you might want to even out the layout. You might try making the "check it" (panel 2) bigger to emphasize the grossness of his breath and run panel 3 from the waste up under panel 1 and 2 to emphasize his fist -the whole punch line (maybe show some restrain - lol just a thought)
Anyway, even if you don't do any of that crap its still very f'n funny! Good job
Next page = late, even though I don't have a schedule! I have a bunch of papers to write and tests to study for, so maybe I'll have one up this weekend. No promises.
And, for fun, http://www.nightgig.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1273 ... digital painting, check it out.
The full body shots seem a bit odd looking, especially against that particular background (it seems like they're just floating there, IMO), but apart from that it looks quite nice.
DiEgo at 5:56PM, Feb. 22, 2006
NEW COMIC TOMORROW! You'll see why it took so long since I completely retooled everything I'm doing.
magicalmisfits at 5:24PM, Feb. 19, 2006
It's only fair!
Jon Hanson at 8:42AM, Feb. 17, 2006
I like the dialouge in this comic, very funny.
DiEgo at 9:33PM, Feb. 14, 2006
Beh, I felt like making uneven panels, so I did. I'm not gonna make any more stuff with these guys basically because I don't want to. My attention span lasts one page. So from now on, it's one page then on to the next idea! Yeah. You'll see. On Friday.
clinically_Incorrect at 12:16PM, Feb. 10, 2006
I agree that you might want to even out the layout. You might try making the "check it" (panel 2) bigger to emphasize the grossness of his breath and run panel 3 from the waste up under panel 1 and 2 to emphasize his fist -the whole punch line (maybe show some restrain - lol just a thought) Anyway, even if you don't do any of that crap its still very f'n funny! Good job
DiEgo at 9:40PM, Feb. 8, 2006
Next page = late, even though I don't have a schedule! I have a bunch of papers to write and tests to study for, so maybe I'll have one up this weekend. No promises. And, for fun, http://www.nightgig.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1273 ... digital painting, check it out.
Randal at 8:43PM, Feb. 7, 2006
:)
magickmaker at 7:10PM, Feb. 7, 2006
Still, an awesome comic altogather. Witty.
DiEgo at 5:51PM, Feb. 7, 2006
I guess that's from not giving them a drop shadow (oops) and not really wanting to make an indoors background.
coinilius at 4:52PM, Feb. 7, 2006
The full body shots seem a bit odd looking, especially against that particular background (it seems like they're just floating there, IMO), but apart from that it looks quite nice.
shadowmaster at 11:43AM, Feb. 7, 2006
An eye for an eye... i like the way he thinks