WtS page sixteen
Genejoke on Feb. 5, 2015
This was going to be two pages, but it seemed a little drawn out, so i cut the flab and here you are.
Davin is showing his quality, he's a bit of a dick but a capable fighter and not as dumb as you might have thought. Stakken on the other hand, he seems itching for a fight.
Has anyone picked up on stakkens changing face and bulk? if you recall in his first appearance he looked like a zombie. well that's because he hadn't feed for a while prior to the start of the story.
El Cid at 9:16PM, Feb. 7, 2015
See, I just figured a cravan was what Lorefolk traveled in instead of a caravan.
Genejoke at 11:10AM, Feb. 7, 2015
no he is totally insulting gathinal there...
El Cid at 9:43AM, Feb. 7, 2015
Heh. Yeah, that is a bad typo there. Jeez, you should fire whoever's proofreading this stuff for you!
El Cid at 9:42AM, Feb. 7, 2015
Usually when people split up on stories like this, they live to regret it.
plymayer at 9:38PM, Feb. 5, 2015
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bravo1102 at 7:43PM, Feb. 5, 2015
Last panel it's "caravan" not craven? It feels like you might have cut too much flab as the conversation seems to jump all over the place.