Jukon's Tomb 1/22
Genejoke on May 22, 2016
This chapter has been written, rewritten, dissected and rewritten more than anything I have ever done.
In the earlier drafts if began with the main characters in a tavern discussing the lack of work and their options, but that was before I decided to put in the “encounters” chapter and used some of that material there. It also involved other elements which I won't discuss yet as they would be spoilers. This opening scene was a very late addition as in every version there was too much info dump and not enough excitement. That alone caused me to rejig a number of elements from the story. Another element that threw a spanner into the works was Bringing Brogan back last chapter. Originally his journey would have been a part of this chapter.
plymayer at 11:01PM, May 29, 2016
neat.
bravo1102 at 5:48PM, May 28, 2016
Betrayal? Come on, American beer is not that bad!
Peipei at 10:08PM, May 26, 2016
That's really creepy, ghost or not!
El Cid at 1:15AM, May 23, 2016
Demon axe guy emerging from the shadows. Nothing odd about that.